This is very delicate and emotional. Your body language and expression are moody--sad and lonely. But the lighting and framing don't really reflect that. Perhaps consider a darker or more low contrast lighting situation. This setting works with your mood but the crop is so close it seems more claustrophobic instead of desolate and alone. Otherwise, the textures and colors are lovely.
There's an interesting tension between the delicacy of the colors and the figure and the rose, pent in by the square alcove. The composition--the large square alcove to the left, the rectangular frame, and the square box in the upper right, and then of course the rectangular bricks themselves--creates a conflict for the figure's organic form. Nice to see this!
This is very delicate and emotional. Your body language and expression are moody--sad and lonely. But the lighting and framing don't really reflect that. Perhaps consider a darker or more low contrast lighting situation. This setting works with your mood but the crop is so close it seems more claustrophobic instead of desolate and alone. Otherwise, the textures and colors are lovely.
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There's an interesting tension between the delicacy of the colors and the figure and the rose, pent in by the square alcove. The composition--the large square alcove to the left, the rectangular frame, and the square box in the upper right, and then of course the rectangular bricks themselves--creates a conflict for the figure's organic form. Nice to see this!
ReplyDeleteThe subtle color in this image is lovely. I really like the way you paid attention to the color of the shoes and the rose.
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